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	<title>Comments for Bob and Jack&#039;s Writing Blog</title>
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		<title>Comment on Zen Poetics&#8211;The Art of Reading a Poem by Free Verse, Rime, and the Transposition Doublet &#124; Jack Remick</title>
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		<dc:creator>Free Verse, Rime, and the Transposition Doublet &#124; Jack Remick</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 19 Jun 2013 20:08:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] But with this difference—The poetics must generate music first, whereas the primary in story is STORY—the tale. English is so rich in homophones—TALE-TAIL and so powerful with its minimal pairs (PEARS,PARES)—bit/bet; sit/set; time/tame—that rime of that kind is a parody. But listen to the harmony of RIME of that KIND—itself an accident which gives a quotidian and mundane line some music—showing once again that the goal of our writing is first music, then grace. (see the Zen Poetics on this blog) [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] But with this difference—The poetics must generate music first, whereas the primary in story is STORY—the tale. English is so rich in homophones—TALE-TAIL and so powerful with its minimal pairs (PEARS,PARES)—bit/bet; sit/set; time/tame—that rime of that kind is a parody. But listen to the harmony of RIME of that KIND—itself an accident which gives a quotidian and mundane line some music—showing once again that the goal of our writing is first music, then grace. (see the Zen Poetics on this blog) [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on About Bob and Jack&#8217;s Writing Blog by Pat</title>
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		<dc:creator>Pat</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 12 Jun 2013 16:24:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Great ideas - thanks!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great ideas &#8211; thanks!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Ginsberg, Ghost Tantras, Ginsberg Marathon by Mindy</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mindy</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 10 Jun 2013 12:25:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Sounds like an event made for you! Glad you enjoyed.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Sounds like an event made for you! Glad you enjoyed.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Ginsberg, Ghost Tantras, Ginsberg Marathon by 12th Ginsberg Marathon &#124; SPLAB</title>
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		<dc:creator>12th Ginsberg Marathon &#124; SPLAB</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 10 Jun 2013 06:16:09 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[[...] McClure were &#8220;opened&#8221; in Subud.) I am simply going to re-post something he wrote for Bob &amp; Jack&#8217;s Writing Blog and post an occasional comment in [...]]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>[...] McClure were &#8220;opened&#8221; in Subud.) I am simply going to re-post something he wrote for Bob &amp; Jack&#8217;s Writing Blog and post an occasional comment in [...]</p>
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		<title>Comment on About Bob and Jack&#8217;s Writing Blog by Jack Remick</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jack Remick</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 08 Jun 2013 15:41:06 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[I like it when writers create their own start lines. This is good work. Irene Hastings has asked me to run a workshop at the September conference. Right now I&#039;m aiming for a couple of hours on The Poetics of Prose. Lots of structured timed writing, of course. Keep posting your progress here. J]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I like it when writers create their own start lines. This is good work. Irene Hastings has asked me to run a workshop at the September conference. Right now I&#8217;m aiming for a couple of hours on The Poetics of Prose. Lots of structured timed writing, of course. Keep posting your progress here. J</p>
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		<title>Comment on About Bob and Jack&#8217;s Writing Blog by Mary Ann Mejdrich</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mary Ann Mejdrich</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 07 Jun 2013 15:03:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hi Jack,  The 3 Old Ladies met yesterday and shared writings.  Then we spent 5 minutes on &quot;I made this decision because...&quot;  It will become part of the memoir I am working on.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Jack,  The 3 Old Ladies met yesterday and shared writings.  Then we spent 5 minutes on &#8220;I made this decision because&#8230;&#8221;  It will become part of the memoir I am working on.</p>
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		<title>Comment on About Bob and Jack&#8217;s Writing Blog by Jack Remick</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jack Remick</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 25 May 2013 13:25:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Mary Ann: this is great, bringing Janet into the process with you. Keep me up to date on your progress. Questions will be answered. Is the pamphlet helpful at all? Tips for the Committed Novelist? Are you using the clock for your writing sessions? That kitchen timer is the key. J]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Mary Ann: this is great, bringing Janet into the process with you. Keep me up to date on your progress. Questions will be answered. Is the pamphlet helpful at all? Tips for the Committed Novelist? Are you using the clock for your writing sessions? That kitchen timer is the key. J</p>
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		<title>Comment on About Bob and Jack&#8217;s Writing Blog by Mary Ann</title>
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		<dc:creator>Mary Ann</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 24 May 2013 21:02:23 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Hi Jack, Happy Birthday!
Marilyn, Janet and I met yesterday for our writing group.  Janet was unable to attend your workshop, but we wanted to share with her so we started with several timed writings.  We worked nonstop for about an hour which is pretty long for three old ladies. :-)  We are going to do more at our next meeting coming prepared with descriptions of our characters.  Finally we are all feeling more focused.]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi Jack, Happy Birthday!<br />
Marilyn, Janet and I met yesterday for our writing group.  Janet was unable to attend your workshop, but we wanted to share with her so we started with several timed writings.  We worked nonstop for about an hour which is pretty long for three old ladies. <img src='http://bobandjackswritingblog.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':-)' class='wp-smiley' />   We are going to do more at our next meeting coming prepared with descriptions of our characters.  Finally we are all feeling more focused.</p>
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		<title>Comment on About Bob and Jack&#8217;s Writing Blog by Jack Remick</title>
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		<dc:creator>Jack Remick</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 20 May 2013 14:34:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Mary Ann: It was a good experience all the way--I&#039;m impressed with the tenacity of the St. George writers. You handled everything I threw at you and as the day developed, I heard the writing kick up to new levels. Thank you for making the day a slam bang success. J]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Mary Ann: It was a good experience all the way&#8211;I&#8217;m impressed with the tenacity of the St. George writers. You handled everything I threw at you and as the day developed, I heard the writing kick up to new levels. Thank you for making the day a slam bang success. J</p>
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		<title>Comment on About Bob and Jack&#8217;s Writing Blog by Mary Ann Mejdrich</title>
		<link>http://bobandjackswritingblog.com/comment-page-9/#comment-29072</link>
		<dc:creator>Mary Ann Mejdrich</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 19 May 2013 20:54:04 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description><![CDATA[Jack, I just wanted to say a big thank you for your presentation in St George on Saturday.  It killed my shoulder, but WOW, the experience was great!]]></description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Jack, I just wanted to say a big thank you for your presentation in St George on Saturday.  It killed my shoulder, but WOW, the experience was great!</p>
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